#3 Volleyball Hannah Volpe
Hey there people of the world. Looking for something to do on
those long fall days? Do you want to try something new? Then come
on down to Fraser Heights Secondary School and tryout for the
volleyball team. It's so fun anyone can do it. Even if you don't make
the volleyball team and you just had so much fun there's even
free gym at lunch (11:55-12:00) every day, so that you can have fun
every day at lunch with all of your friends. Volleyball is so much
fun that everyone you tell will want to play. So go tell all of your
friends to come and enjoy a fun game of volleyball. Come on
down to Fraser Heights Secondary School and have the time or your
life playing volleyball.
WARNING:You may experience to much FUN!!! You may also experience
headache, broken bones, cuts,bruises, sore arms, shoulders, and fingers.
(Come on
down to Fraser Heights Secondary School and have the time or your
life playing volleyball. Is to the music of mattress land.)
Hi Hannah, I like how you have a lot of information in your post, such as the time and how you might be injured. Personally, I think that if there were more datils, and if you put the list like post more into a connected essay, the result would be better.
ReplyDeleteHey Hannah, I like how you describe your volleyball thing.Your story is centered on wordpress which is wierd
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