Today
in class we worked on our paragraph booklets, descriptive paragraphs. We did
this because we need to improve our paragraph writing skills. This could be
helpful for our other classes when you have to write an essay. The homework for
tomorrow is the left side of the descriptive paragraphs page. Remember to brainstorm, outline, and double spaced
draft. You also have to comment on 2 blog posts for tonight. There is flex
tomorrow at 11:15. You can look on the student blog groups for the homework to
see if the have pictures of the work.
I like how you went in-depth about the homework, about what we're supposed to do, and when it's due. A suggestion I would make is too be a bit more descriptive describing the lessons; for example, you could write some examples of the lessons. Other than that, it was a great post, Hannah!
ReplyDeleteThanks Hannah! This really helped me! The way you wrote this is good. Maybe next time you could add more description and there are a few mistakes in there as well.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you reminded us what to do and how. Very helpful. Very few grammar mistakes but more detail in exactly where the assignment ks would be helpful. I couldn't visualize jt very well. Well done.
ReplyDeleteComments are getting much better group! You suggest specific areas for improvement. To help further, suggest how the student might make those improvements.
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